99 Words - Prompt - wishing star
Maybe a tad irreverent. All I can say is, it is what came to mind. ......... Oh well.
“Wish I were, Wish I might……… Ah, screw it. This doesn’t work anymore.”
Crestfallen, Jesus stood on the Mount and stared up at the night sky. Moments passed as he wallowed in self pity. Off to his left, a brighter star than the rest seemed to come closer.
“Boy, I told you there were limits. “
“But Dad, how can I turn this planet around if you won’t cooperate?”
Contrary to my write from the hip style, instead of going with my first effort, I tweaked this one into three slightly different takes. This was the third version. And though I am still on the fence somewhat as to which one I like the best, I felt this one told a more complete story.
Regardless, seems I have gotten over that awkward period of re-acquainting myself with Flash. Cool. Trying to make it better is a good next step.
Oh Yeah - I wrote the first draft to the tune "Honey Dripper" as performed by Dr John, the Night Tripper. Some of the Devil's music.
Later Gator ..............................................